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First I'll follow the initial task and give a number 10.
Jim can be split into:

* Psychopath
*Intellect

So first off psychopath. Whilst Moriarty is a psychopath who can murder you in any given second the point of him is that he doesn't. Whilst he does kill he doesn't do it just because he can. If he did no one in London would be alive. Which is why it makes him out of character to have him murder everything he sees. You play this part wonderfully by letting Jim talk and saving the danger as subtext rather than saying 'I can kill you' bluntly you let events develop which lets Jim have the Russian Roulette feel he did in the books. Not if he'll kill you but when.

Being intelligent isn't about using big words that no one says other than in the 16th century so the say you choose you words work so well. Again it's all in the subtext you provide the tone of voice, flow of words, etc. all let Jim being intellectual but not patronising, well other than when he wants to be.

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=Willis-Crisp Mar 17, 2012  Student Writer
Hi Troy, tis' Will :3

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~blackbunty Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hey Will.
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:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

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Some points for your birthday, da? 8D HAPPY BIRTHDAY, even though we haven't talked in forever but I still love you and your amazing pornz.

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~blackbunty Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh Sweety thank you :) Love you too
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Hello!:iconcaekplz:
Happy early birthday!
Hope you have a good one!


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Thank you for the watch~ I kinda flipped out when I saw Spencer on your page lol.
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~Kubulu Jul 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Hi dearie :) I feel honored to have been invited to be a contributor in your group :) Unfortunately dA won't let me co-found or contribute in another group >.> Apparently I can't do either in more than 3 groups unless I have premium, which sucks >.> I CAN however join as a regular member though :)

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~blackbunty Jul 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Fair enough :)
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~TheFlyingDachshund Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thank you for the fave!! :)
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Heya! :heart: Since you're a writer too I need your opinion on something. What do you think about RPF stories?

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Mood: Humor ~blackbunty Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I think it can be very effective. Although it does depend on wither you know the person or not, as the public perception of characters can be far different from the actions of people, which can create excellent stories.

I find them highly fascinating but I also think that when writing them you need to be at least a little respectful for the person (ie. comment in artist comments to say that this is not real life and there is no proof(unless it is showing someone's actions that did happen in real life)) no matter what you think of them in real life, unless of course the writing was meant to show directs dislike of them.


Wow that was a rather long answer, I often feel sorry for Sir at school having to make any essay I write :P

What is your opinion?
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Long answers are :heart::heart:

My English has gone backwards so please forgive me my mistakes! :D

I have always been a bit negative about RPF stories until now and it was very uncomfortable for me to read RPF stories. Now, I read really good ski jumping RPF story while ago and it changed my opinion a little. I used to think that writing about real people is too personal and maybe even disrespectful. After reading the story I got curious about what other people think. :D

Now I have started to think, like you said, that when the writer makes it clear it’s not real life and is at least a bit careful about what they write, the stories can be really good and won’t make me uncomfortable anymore. The author of the story I read has been following ski jumping for years so she knows a little about what she writes. While the real life facts were right the personalities of the characters she created and the atmosphere in the story was so great and beautiful. The real life and her own creations were in perfect balance. It was really a pleasure to read that.

Fascinating, like you described it. :D

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~blackbunty Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
If I may ask, what area made you original discomfort with RLF? (You probably have already typed this, but with the Drunk Irish Jedi :devMcMcluven15:sat next to me I'm rather distracted :/)
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WHOA!!! Alistar just texted me! Since when were you going out with Alexander??!!?

Plus Hotchner called about next meet up? U gonna come?
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~blackbunty Feb 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
About 3 months, sorry I was going to tell you but it's been rather hecktic as of late soz man *make up hugs*


Wouldn't miss it for the world! :)
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Hey Troy! Thanks for :+fav: in your "Great Images" folder :)

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~Sakurita94 Feb 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks for theh fav =)

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Thank you so much for the favs!!! :)

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Mood: Love ~waterearthgoddess Feb 8, 2011  Student Writer
Thanks for the fav on Profiling the Profilers!


It also helps that you're a Merlin fan. ;)

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~blackbunty Feb 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
lol
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Thanks for the watch!
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